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Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Hood of Niadris - Prologue


In the time of powerful magicians—the time when the Great One, Avon, walked the land—Brack was a peaceful and prosperous land.  The Great One and the Gardeons, his disciples, taught the inhabitants of Brack the ways of righteousness.
But the Great Avon had to leave his land of Brack and return to Godholm when one of his own Gardeons, Avongel, betrayed him and corrupted the land.  The Great One left his Gardeons in Brack to keep Avongel from completely destroying his land.  The Gardeons succeeded in pushing Avongel and his grotesque armies of cryans and evoluns south of Brack, and managed to trap Avongel there.  Avongel took control of this place and it became known as Tophet, the land of smoke. 
In case Avongel was to ever break the spell that held him there, Niadris, a magician fawn and disciple of Halbark, one of the Gardeons, forged a helmet and planted into it the knowledge of ending the reign of Avongel if Avongel ever escaped.  By forging this powerful instrument, Niadris quickly made enemies, mainly bounty hunters, hoping to gain something back from Avongel by destroying it.  Fleeing for his life, Niadris hid the helmet in the Forest of Halbark.  There in the enchanted forest, the helmet was safe.  No Aizon could penetrate the magical thickness of the forest of Halbark
After a few centuries of imprisonment, Avongel found a way to escape—through the Menelandine border.  He released his Raiders of Night, his messengers of death, to prepare for his return to Brack.  The Raiders began a reign of terror.  In every village, town, or city visited by these Raiders, only ruins and smoke were left behind.  Armies of any kind fell to the feet of these Raiders.  Nothing stood in their way. 
More recently, the Raiders have completely devastated the territory of Meneland and have moved north into Kanine.  Their direction of destruction seems to be northwards and their next possible direction is east until the Avas Sea—in this way, destroying all of Brack from east to west.   


Perfect - Chapter 1


Chapter 1
Adam Thomason

“Thomason is it true that you stopped all these criminals without backup?” said my boss, the chief, as he threw a stack of photos from a thick brown file on my desk.

“Yes.” My response was almost immediate.  I knew what he was going to say—not that I’m that good in predicting the future—but because this is the second time he’s said that this week…the sixty-ninth time this month…the three hundred and twenty-fifth time this year.

“What happened to your partner?”

“He couldn’t catch up.”  My eyes were cold…emotionless.  My partner, Diego, was probably from the lowest part of the food chain.  All I have ever seen him consume are doughnuts and that poison the companies laboured “carbonated drinks”.  It is to no surprise that he is as fat—and slow—as last year’s escargot. 

“He was trying?” suggested the chief. Diego was his nephew and he didn’t want to have to fire relatives.

“Yes, but he collapsed after his twenty-ninth step.” 

“What? Never mind, I want your report on my desk tomorrow.”

“It is already completed and lying on your desk bellow Steven’s report on the fifty-third car theft this week.”

The chief gave me a weird look—it would be classified something between confusion and surprise, and a tinge of anger.  When he composed himself, he walked out saying something about some donkey which had a dog as a mother being too smart a donkey. 

I looked at the mug shots of the people that I recently put behind bars.  Why do they need to commit crimes?  I knew from analysis that there were roughly four groups of criminals: they had no other choice, they wanted revenge, they were dared into doing it, they wanted easy money, or they just felt like it.  Out of the eighteen photos, I can only see that only one really needed money—Tony Long whom I caught just last night.  I caught up with him in an alley.  He had been fleeing the patrols by taking the narrowest paths.  He gave me more thrills than the rest.  He had stolen two point three thousand dollars worth of diamonds.  When he realized that he could not escape, he begged me to let him go, because his daughter was dying of cancer and he had already used up all the money he and his wife had saved on her chemotherapy.  I arrested him but allowed him to say one last goodbye to his wife and daughter.  I left a check in his house which was enough for his daughter’s treatment for two months.  His wife will find it in two hours and twenty-one minutes time when she returns from visiting him from the locker.

I put the photos away in my almost full file of solved crimes, grabbed my jacket and headed back home.  I plugged the headphones from my mp3 player into my ears and switched to the radio function.  The radio station was playing some new song named More than a Simple Life by Fantasies are Fake.  I listened to the rock beat and the catchy tune of the chorus.

It’s more than a simple life
For most of us at least.
We have to work hard,
Before we can even feast.
We got to earn a living
Before we can start life.
Not like many heiresses
Who’ve been to Paris,
And such,
And only had a simple life.

Besides the jibe at the celebrity, the song actually had meaning.  I thought about Tony Long who had a ‘more than a simple life’.  He was an honest worker, but always spoke what he believed in.  His bosses promoted him twice this a year, but still his wage was not enough.  He asked for bonuses and searched for other ways to get money legally.  He took loans and borrowed from friends, until finally resorting to theft.  There are so many people with more than enough money and so many with not enough.  All we have to do to make the world a better place is to get rid of all these poverty by making the rich poorer and the poor, richer.  Though luck.  No comfortable sane business man would give up his luxury of a mansion to live in a ‘lowly’ apartment.

“Simon, I’m home.” I announced as I opened my front door.  My Toby cat appeared at the door with his empty milk bowl in his mouth.  I went to the kitchen to fetch him his milk, poured it into his bowl before relaxing into my couch.  I switched on the TV and browsed the channels until I found the local news.

“Crime rates are dropping,” announced the anchor-woman, “All this due to Chief inspector Miles and his team.”

I should be angry that I wasn’t acknowledged, but what’s the point?  It’s useless.  I watched as they interviewed the chief on his strategy and I couldn’t help smiling.  The chief mentioned about equality in the department, and all that gibberish about how well he treats his staff.  I was shocked to hear that he did not mention anything about a dog’s son or a ‘whole donkey’.

I fell asleep during his speech—I could not help it: I hear his voice everyday—and had that same dream again.  I dreamt that I was in water—no, some sort of liquid that does not burn your eyes—and restricted.  I could see people in lab coats starring at me in disbelief.  Then I see total blackness.  In the same dream this process repeats itself like I was blacking out and coming back again and again.  I would not call it a nightmare, but it did make me feel strange. 

I woke up at five in the morning.  Instead of getting ready for work, I sat down on my coffee table and pondered over the dream.  It has been three weeks since I started dreaming about the same thing and every time the dream became clearer and clearer like a focus function on a camera had been activated—I could even make out the faces of some of them. 

 I did not sit and think for long.  I got ready and left for work at six-thirty.  Like a robot, I reached in my pocket and listened to my mp3 again.  I was in no mood to hear the morning crews of the radio stations joke about, so I switched to my songs and listened to my playlist.  The song: Mirrorman by the Magicians soon blasted through my earphones.

I woke up today
Feeling a little drowsy.
But I know that life could not wait
For me to be ready.
So I went to the bathroom
To freshen myself again
Than I looked into the mirror
And saw the…

Mirrorman, mirrorman,
What is it you see?
Mirrorman, mirrorman,
Why it is only me.
Mirrorman, mirrorman,
Who is to say I am he?
Mirrorman, mirrorman,
Well, you have to be somebody?

I turned on the shuffle function and changed the song—I was in no mood for thought-provoking songs and that album by the Magicians was entitled: Think About That.
A smooth melody soon sang through the phones.  It was the relaxing voice of Jane Benedict singing Chosen

From the beginning of time,
We were chosen by God
We are here for a reason,
Placed here by God.
To look after his creation,
Every rock, sand, or sod.
We are chosen by the Almighty
To care for our city.

We are created for a reason.
We are chosen for a cause.
We are created for this season
We are chosen for a cause…

I gave up and switched off my player.  The song did not help my mood—firstly, because I did not know where or when I began.  My earliest memories are of those five years ago when I was fished out of the sea in the beginning of winter—not with bullets in my body like the movie.  I suffered from hyperthermia and apparently that can lead to amnesia as well.  I did not know how I managed to communicate with the people in English, but I did.  I later discovered that I was the ninth in twenty bodies recovered in that week alone in the same river.  I was the only survivor.  All of us had a mark on our backs that read: A.D.A.M. followed by numbers—my number was thirteen.  Eventually I joined the police force hoping to uncover the truth about my origin, but until now, I have learnt close to nothingt.

With a face that could scare Simon, I stomped into the HQ.  No one talked to me the whole morning because of my face—not even the chief.

Perfect - Prologue


Consciousness…
Who am I? Where am I? Why is this water not stinging my eyes? Who are these people starring at me? All these…questions…and I don’t even…have... one answer….
Unconsciousness…

Humans in lab coats run about the room.  Everyone checking their delicate instruments to see what went wrong (or right depending on the context).  Though his eyes opened for only five seconds, they all knew that A.D.A.M. 13 had reached consciousness. 

A group gather at a whiteboard as a scientist draws complicated symbols in a language only those present understood.  Engineers examine the stasis tube which A.D.A.M 13 is held in checking for cracks and other possible malfunctions.  Another group of scientists gather on a platform near the stasis tube analysing possibilities on devices that would make a computer seem outdated.  Scientific jargons fill the lab like music.  All these scientists trying in vain to answer one simple question: How?

“What if our calculations are flawed?” suggested the philosophical Dr. Lang.

“Are you trying to say that the laws, the foundation of this project, which we have built upon is wrong?” said an over-eager, young scientist by the name of Dr. Colleen

Newton has been wrong before.” The comment came out of thin air and the speaker could not be identified.

“I’m not suggesting that,” said Dr. Lang, “I’m just saying what if the answers we are looking for is not in chemistry or physics but in simple biology?  Maybe A.D.A.M. 13 woke up because he felt like it?”

“No way,” announced Prof. Sawyer, head of the neurological department, “We didn’t implant any human emotion into A.D.A.M. 13 yet…unless…”

Silence fills the hall as everyone quietens to hear Prof. Sawyer’s words.

“Unless, the human instincts we programmed him with made him believe he was alive? It’s a theory.”

Prof. Sawyer’s words held no water—mainly because it held no scientific backing.

Little did everyone present know that the answer lay in front of them, and that Prof. Sawyer was right—A.D.A.M. 13 woke up because he believed that he could.

Prompters - Chapter 1


How long has it been since I last seen everything?  There’s got to be a mistake.  I lost this long ago—when I lost you

March 13, 2009—Friday

            It has been weeks since I last had a night’s worth of sleep.  At first, I would just wake up for no reason at all.  Then something strange happened—I started seeing people going through their day in my sleep.  It started with people I knew—like Michael and John—but ever since some nights ago, I’ve had ‘visions’ of people I don’t even know. 
            Maybe my mind is just making up stories.  Being a journalist means I get a lot of information running around my head.  Maybe because I read too much, I’m getting all these dreams.  My mind can’t even cipher what is real anymore.  These dreams could be just fractions of my imagination joining together to create a perfect book.  But then again, how can my subconscious make up stories of things I haven’t done or people I’ve never even met?
            All my so-called dreams seem to always focus on one person at a time.  Once I saw this boy wake up in the middle of his sleep because he wet his pants.  Then there was this time when I saw a couple get robbed by gunned assailants.  My mind followed the thieves until they unmasked—the funny thing is that the cover of the morning newspaper the day after had the headline saying:

Gunned Thieves Wanted.

               I assumed it as merely coincidence, after all people get robbed all the time here, but the next night, I dreamt about the same men.  This time they robbed an ATM machine, but were caught by the cops.  The next day’s headline was:

Gunned Thieves Caught

            I studied the picture given and to my surprise it was the men that I had dreamt about.
            I know strange things happen to a lot of people, but it does not happen to me—it shouldn’t.  I have been away from all possibilities of getting all these messages.
I know religion is not a main factor—or is it.  I mean—I’ve been a very good Christian all these years.  I’ve heard the pastor preach a lot about spiritual gifts and talents.  Could I have the gift of prophesy? 
I know that this ‘gift’ is not hereditary.  My parents—or grandparents—have never told me of such things before.  Being in a family of many doctors, teachers, and psychiatrists mean they don’t believe in such things. 
I don’t think my sister or my brother could contribute to this.  Unless they have put in so much stress on me that I have finally popped and completely lost my mind. 
Or maybe it’s a middle-child talent?  I highly doubt this last theory.  Being a middle child means you get half the attention the other two gets.  You probably end up neglected or you speak out so much that you will be heard.
This enigma of visions and prophesying is getting me worked up.  I’ve planned a meeting with a shrink on the 20th of March—just to make sure I’m fine.  It won’t cost me a cent anyways since my Uncle Jonas is one himself.  I’m not sure whether I’m going to like the verdict though.
So I decided to start a journal of my life with these gifts.  And here is my first entry.  You never know when this might make a good novel one day. 

Until I write again,
—Thomas Shayne—

I Fell For You Slowly


It wasn’t love at first sight,
Cupid didn’t do a thing
There was no lightning flash
No order from a king.

I fell for you slowly
Like a soft and gentle song
I realize that I liked you
A feeling that was so strong…

There was no aha moment
No secret spell.
There was no light bulb
No ringing bell.

I fell for you slowly
And slowly I still fall.
There’s no way of stopping this
There’s no way to stall.

Why am I falling for you?
What have you done?
Because it’s hard to stop it
After a fire like this has begun.

I fell for you slowly
So slowly that I didn’t know
But when I woke up one morning,
I felt it was so.

A Broken Man


A broken man can understand. What it means, to be in sinking sand
What he feels though is much like us. The feeling of loss, the want; the thirst…
Where can he run where there’s no sun, where the shame has not begun?
Is there a hope; a place to cope for a broken man…

He’s looking high and dry, but far too far
When the truth he seeks, is right where you are.
The light he needs, is in your heart,
Are you doing your part?

The truth is here, it’s so near to the broken man full of fear.
What is your lot in this plot? You have gained, you’ve lost; you’ve fought.
You can clearly see; you’re found; you’re free.  And now you have kept the key.
The key of hope; a place to cope for a broken man…

A man has come to save our lives
A wise man seeks and he finds
A humble man begs and he is free
A blind man asks and he starts to see
So why are we keeping this light
When we can make the world so bright?